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I am Society



I am society

I am the mind

I am greedy

I am the kind


I am love

And I am peace

I am what you

Think of me is


I twirl and twist

And stop the change

I break the bottle

And shift the phase


I am Mighty

I am a Beast

I can be tasty

But I can be least

Least bothered

Least concerned

Lest you make

Me feel


I am perfect

I am time

I am mortal

I am fine


I am a story

I am a tale

I was the king

And the angel


I am cold

Cold like the mountains

And I am warm

Warm

When the sunshine beats

When the grenades fail

I am the blanket

I inhale

All your sorrow

All your grief

I am old

And I am ancient

But I am patient

I am the society

- Saswati Barat

Comments

Arnav said…
Nice..

"I am what you Think of me is" .. is so true .. this can be linked to so many things.. :)
The society is truly what we make of it..


Keep writing and smiling :)
8/04/2009 10:30:00 PM
Arnav said…
Nice..

"I am what you Think of me is" .. is so true .. this can be linked to so many things.. :)
The society is truly what we make of it..


Keep writing and smiling :)
8/04/2009 10:31:00 PM
Nameless Fameless said…
thanx a lot Arnav :)
8/04/2009 10:31:00 PM
Indrajit said…
"Beast
I can be tasty" - I did not like this line, could have been better.
Also, I did not like the font. You cud have arranged the lines like a poem, which would look more catching to the eyes.

And about the poem, this is one of your best. Copyright it lest someone else takes this gem away.

:)
8/05/2009 08:32:00 PM
Nameless Fameless said…
honestly speaking .. i did put it like a poem format BUT some stupid HTML formatting prob and did not take in that format .. and put it like this paragraph :(

please state why you did not like the line .. ?? i wanna know

And of course .. thank you so very very much ..
8/05/2009 10:32:00 PM
Indrajit said…
Somehow I find that line unsuitable for this poem, it cud have been expressed in dif way maybe. Just an opinion and you might not agree, which is fine. :)

Otherwise the poem is beauty. :)

BTW, blog updated I.
8/06/2009 12:29:00 AM
Cinderella said…
Good one!

I kind of felt you ended it abruptly...why dont you add some more and bring it down gently ?
8/07/2009 11:05:00 AM
Cinderella said…
And btw what wrong with your format..the words are all close together with no space...would've looked so poised in a proper poetry format.
8/07/2009 11:06:00 AM
Roopkatha said…
dat was hard hitting,beautiful..
9/21/2009 10:23:00 PM
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