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night of the angel

the angel
came riding on a unicorn
she stood by
waiting for me to come
but since i was late she went away
never to come back again
will she not understand my
plight ?
oh angel
come back please
take me with you
to the woods
to the ice
and the sand
let me too see
the world with your eyes

Comments

Indrajit said…
Very simple and very poetic....
Keep writing more frequently. tc.
10/09/2009 10:41:00 PM
Indrajit G. said…
Hmm, thank you Saswati.

I checked your website and commntd in some places. Pls check and th website is really fantastic.

tc.
10/10/2009 12:05:00 AM
Gautam Anand said…
It seems u hv changed ur style of writing.. nyways shorter and crisper means.. u can write more frequently...

After a sabbatical of 3 months .. .. it feels good to be back in the blosphere.. awaiting ur insights into my new poem
10/21/2009 03:46:00 AM
Nameless Fameless said…
i din change my style .. its just that my emotions change :)
10/23/2009 01:47:00 PM
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