Thoughtful thoughts

Thoughtful thoughts
Of a migrant mind
With darted eyes
And stitched up lips

With pale white gaze
Like full moon haze
Come let me show you
MY world

Of drunken beats
Of left over life
Like merry go round
And seated knives

Belt it tight
Or else might bite
What laughter or cry
Smirk or shy

Bellowing sounds
Of heartfelt kiss
Let me show the passion
The heart warming bliss

Courage and wisdom of tightly
Switched them off on
Sacred religion
You and Me

Me the world u seek
Of thoughtful thoughts
And drunken beats
Of left over life

Thoughtful thoughts
Of a migrant mind
With darted eyes
And stitched up lips

Saswati Barat
10:40pm
March 22nd 2009

Comments

Toon Indian said…

very well written..thoughful thoughts...keep it up!!!

3/23/2009 12:00:00 AM

Krishanu said…

Impressive poetry..perhaps, it would have been better had you delved deeper...But in the phrases,
"What laughter or cry
Smirk or shy"
...shy dosen't seem right there...but still analysing emotions isn't easy...and as Rahul commends: Keep it up!!!

3/23/2009 09:20:00 AM

Jagjit said…

:) You have been blessed in some way. :)

3/30/2009 01:06:00 PM

Nameless Fameless said…

Thank you Jagjit :)

3/30/2009 03:25:00 PM

Gautam Anand said…

Nice..
but I agree with Krishanu.. wud have been better if u went deeper..

4/30/2009 01:01:00 AM

Commotion

Let it go Let it stay Let it run But see it does not run away Let it feel Let it touch Let it hold But only till you can behold Sweet noise Purple dust Morning and Twilight of dusk Sincere love Pathetic anyways ? Sooth your heart Open it Smell it But see that you don't hurt it Don't eat it It might not taste so good As it looks to be Be like that Do like this Compare Don't Consult Judge by your brain Not your heart Judge By the ways You have experienced Life And not by the Ways taught to you Sense it And it will be yours May be Forever... - Saswati Barat 1:14 Am May 21,2009

I am Society

I am society I am the mind I am greedy I am the kind I am love And I am peace I am what you Think of me is I twirl and twist And stop the change I break the bottle And shift the phase I am Mighty I am a Beast I can be tasty But I can be least Least bothered Least concerned Lest you make Me feel I am perfect I am time I am mortal I am fine I am a story I am a tale I was the king And the angel I am cold Cold like the mountains And I am warm Warm When the sunshine beats When the grenades fail I am the blanket I inhale All your sorrow All your grief I am old And I am ancient But I am patient I am the society - Saswati Barat

Mindless Heart

how cunning is the world makes you round and round and takes your mind to believe its flat cause if it was round it wouldn't let you fall it wouldn't let you just crash and the proof of its flatness raw still hard cold stones which always makes you trip and injure but if it was round wouldn't it let you just go and never let go ? And also the sky beautiful they say I say its just a blanket Blanket to cover up your eyes and force you to see the world like others do But why Why shall I ? Don't i have me own mind ? Can't I say feel That would be just mine Yes I know I am selfish I am jealous But will you say Why i can't be like me ? When they do the same and claim its just for fun Why can't I ? Why is mine always the crime Why ? - Nameless Fameless

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