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Oh Please

Touch me with your smile
Touch me with your heart
Don't Leave
Oh please
Let me touch you with my soul
And feel you with my heart
Oh please
Don't Leave

I know i have been bad
May be worse than the most
But you know
I know that you know
I do love you alot
Come back
Don't leave me
Please
Oh please
Don't leave

When you smile
I feel the light
And the dark in the night
Like a starry gaze above
When you talk
Yes ..
Then i feel as if i am
Not with me anymore
Like i feel
Being swept off
By a invisible light
And then
You touch me with your smile
Touch me with your heart
I know
Yes i know
You won't leave me
Oh yes ...

- Saswati Barat
1, June 2009

Comments

Cinderella said…
Awww...beautiful !

You knw when I first read the header, I thought it was a frownin eyed-irritational face-smirky mouth "oh please" !

But then as your piece unfolded, I saw it was a dreamy eyed-blush blush face-eager mouth "oh please" !

Lovely !
6/02/2009 12:49:00 PM
ShReyA said…
sweet, lyrical,innocent.... :) could make a nice song out of it. Ever tried your hands on it :->
6/02/2009 07:26:00 PM
Nameless Fameless said…
i was singing the "oh please" and writing .. it IS a song shreya :P ...
6/02/2009 07:28:00 PM
Nameless Fameless said…
thank u Cindrella... :)
6/02/2009 07:29:00 PM
Toon Indian said…
nice one..and yeah will turn out to be a nice song!!
6/03/2009 10:26:00 AM
Jagjit said…
*Touchy*

Are you okay? Hope u are. Nice song btw. :) keep going.
6/04/2009 11:43:00 AM
A Poetess said…
aww. sweet poem. very cutesy and childish.
6/04/2009 10:26:00 PM
Nameless Fameless said…
@ Jagjit .. yes i am doing good .. :)Thank u so much

@ Dyuti .. thank u re :P
6/04/2009 11:03:00 PM
Krishanu said…
Yeah, I loved the confidence you have on your love, dear... It's soothing.
6/14/2009 11:44:00 AM
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