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I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf
I am the smile in the tear
And I am the useful in the heap

The heap of wastes which is thrown away
Away by those who don't care
Care to even look at me stuck
Deep within there

I am skeptical
I am jealous
I am lonely
But I am fearless
Brave enough to say

I lie

And I lie to see that others
Are not bothered to care
Care about the real person
That is I

I say I am good
Good in ways which world doesn't want me to be
Good in ways where people mock
At the very sight of me
I , as a human
Graced by the heaven
Live and let live I within me


- Saswati Barat
9:21 PM
22nd Jan 2010

Comments

Indrajit said…
Thanks for the comment. well that was too much, I personally did not liek the poem. But glad that you liked that much. It made my day.

For this poem, well it rocks, more than any of your poems. I am serious. Better copyright this one. :)

I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf


And I lie to see that others
Are not bothered to care
Care about the real person
That is I


Good in ways which world doesn't want me to be

These are some of yur impactful lines. :)
AM glad to read such a gr8 stuff today. Way to go!
1/22/2010 10:27:00 PM
Indrajit said…
n WOW What a mural... lovely.

BTW, i showed the 1st 4 lines to a friend.

HEre's the chat -

ise padiye......
Indrajit I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf
I am the smile in the tear
And I am the useful in the heap

Kunal B vallah
Kunal B kaun hai ye jisne likha hai ise
1/22/2010 10:29:00 PM
Arnav said…
Amazing :)

Its beautiful :)
Keep Writing and Smiling :)
1/24/2010 12:09:00 AM
Purva said…
woman...wow! i simply love the flow!! keep writing...

Happy living!
1/28/2010 05:22:00 PM
Diwakar Sinha said…
I love the play of words here..very beautifully weaved into those 'almost' sentences that stand out..beautiful.
2/04/2010 07:07:00 PM
Daanish said…
cool observations,we are who we think we are :)
2/08/2010 11:21:00 AM
Divya said…
Really loved reading it :)
12/26/2011 10:48:00 PM
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