I
I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf
I am the smile in the tear
And I am the useful in the heap
The heap of wastes which is thrown away
Away by those who don't care
Care to even look at me stuck
Deep within there
I am skeptical
I am jealous
I am lonely
But I am fearless
Brave enough to say
I lie
And I lie to see that others
Are not bothered to care
Care about the real person
That is I
I say I am good
Good in ways which world doesn't want me to be
Good in ways where people mock
At the very sight of me
I , as a human
Graced by the heaven
Live and let live I within me
- Saswati Barat
9:21 PM
22nd Jan 2010
Thanks for the comment. well that was too much, I personally did not liek the poem. But glad that you liked that much. It made my day.
ReplyDeleteFor this poem, well it rocks, more than any of your poems. I am serious. Better copyright this one. :)
I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf
And I lie to see that others
Are not bothered to care
Care about the real person
That is I
Good in ways which world doesn't want me to be
These are some of yur impactful lines. :)
AM glad to read such a gr8 stuff today. Way to go!
n WOW What a mural... lovely.
ReplyDeleteBTW, i showed the 1st 4 lines to a friend.
HEre's the chat -
ise padiye......
Indrajit I am the circle in the square
The tree in the leaf
I am the smile in the tear
And I am the useful in the heap
Kunal B vallah
Kunal B kaun hai ye jisne likha hai ise
Amazing :)
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful :)
Keep Writing and Smiling :)
woman...wow! i simply love the flow!! keep writing...
ReplyDeleteHappy living!
I love the play of words here..very beautifully weaved into those 'almost' sentences that stand out..beautiful.
ReplyDeletecool observations,we are who we think we are :)
ReplyDeleteReally loved reading it :)
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