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A tale of a woman

The peace I search


Of mind and soul


The peace of being alone


Born to be beaten


Crushed at the feet


Dropped out of school


And then sold away with relief


A burden of a daughter


A sister


And a wife


I learn


I live


I learn to live


And live to let others live too


My powers they say


Are of no use


Except of mane if any I produce


Give me a chance


Let me fight too


Let me be free


Free from the wisdoms


Stitched by thee


Some peace of mind


And peace of soul


My body my womb


I can console


I am not born to listen


Their yes or no


I am not bound to sit


When the heads nod and go


I shall not follow


What my mother has been


In laws too


Are not to be rhymed


I can find myself


Amongst the crowd of many


Let me fly too


With my own grown wings


- Saswati Barat



Comments

Indrajit said…
The poem started very poignantly of the injustices meted out to the womenfolk.
The last stanza is of hope and the spirit & I wish every women should raise their vocals against any oppressions.
Perhaps they(married ones) r also to be blamed cos of their stupid 'pati parmeshwar' mindset.n they pass on this to their next generations.

It shows a very realistic underbelly of India that reminds us once again that India is still miles away from being actually called 'India Shining.' n it is a brutal whipping on this illusion of 'india shining' tht the 'intellectuals' go ga ga abt.

Very good of you to touch on ths social relevance.
Gautam Anand said…
touching.. wud be a word short of describing the beauty of this poem ..


In b/w.. inviting u to comment on my new poem ..
Zephyr said…
ah, this was absolutely beautiful! so elegant... i could literally paint a picture of a strong yet graceful woman in my head. perfect!
Thank you so much Indrajit , Gautam and Zephyr .. that was really encouraging. .

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